A Handat Writing… Strategies ➤ p. 163, 169 a letter A. Enrichir vos phrases I read your article about tobacco advertising. 1. Ajoutez trois précisions aux endroits adéquats : ‘published in The Guardian’ – ‘on May 31st, 2002’ – ‘enlightening’. 2. Transformez la première partie en utilisant after + V -ING pour indiquer ensuite que c’est après la lecture de cet article que vous avez décidé d’écrire au journal pour faire part de votre indignation. (be shocked/indignant) B. Améliorer votre expression écrite 1 Analysez le sujet proposé Write a letter to the editor of The Guardian to express your indignation after reading the second article. (120 words) a letter La forme que vous devez respecter. the editor of The Guardian Le destinataire de la lettre. express your indignation/the second article Le contenu de la lettre. (120 words) N’oubliez pas de compter les mots et d’indiquer leur nombre en fin de travail. 2 Rassemblez vos idées Utilisez le texte de départ… ■ …pour trouver du lexique • les fabricants de cigarettes : tobacco giants. • la publicité : to persuade someone (not) to – to sponsor – to make someone + adj. – to run an ad – to take up smoking – to encourage the habit. • ceux qui sont contre la publicité : an anti-smoking campaign – to be taken off the air – the anti-smoking lobby – a responsible advertiser – a worldwide ban on tobacco advertising – to act in the public interest. ■ …pour illustrer les idées que vous devez développer Justifiez la raison pour laquelle vous écrivez : parce que vous avez vous-même vu une publicité, parce que vous souhaitez expliquer la situation en France, qui est différente de celle de la Grande-Bretagne, parce que vous souhaitez soutenir l’action envisagée par le gouvernement britannique : ban all tobacco advertising… Mobilisez vos connaissances personnelles ■ Cherchez des idées supplémentaires dans la page de lexique. REVISE YOUR VOCABULARY ➤ p. 100 Unit 5 ■ Ad Breaks ■ Utilisez le premier article pour : • évoquer les effets du tabac (the effects of smoking) ; • mentionner d’autres circonstances où la publicité sur le tabac est choquante (sporting events) ; • proposer votre opinion sur la question : hard-hitting advertisements, a total ban ou encore restricting the marketing of tobacco products to young people. ■ Exprimer une opinion personnelle avec fermeté : c’est en général le cas lorsque l’on écrit au “Courrier des lecteurs” (Letters to the editor) d’un journal ou d’un magazine. TOOLS I & II • Pensez à des adjectifs comme unbelievable, revolting, unethical, etc. • Conviction : It goes without saying that… – I am convinced that… – Studies have shown that… • Désapprobation : I am displeased/very upset with/ about… – I totally disapprove of… – This is utterly unacceptable. 3 Réfléchissez au plan et préparez-vous à rédiger. ■ Commencez Utilisez la bonne formule de départ. STRATEGIES ➤ p. 169 ■ Rédigez • Prêtez attention à la présentation de la lettre. STRATEGIES ➤ p. 170 • Vos paragraphes doivent développer chacun une idée, afin que votre courrier soit clair et bien structuré. • Pensez à utiliser votre travail de la partie A. ■ Terminez • Pour conclure, vous pouvez réutiliser la tournure idiomatique de l’article (a wolf in sheep’s clothing), ou encore chercher parmi les proverbes que vous connaissez. • Soignez la formule de fin. STRATEGIES ➤ p. 169 Now, your turn! 93 ) 2 Read Strategies ➤ p. 166 John LANCHESTER Born in Hamburg, raised in the Far East and educated in Britain. A football reporter, an obituary writer, a book editor and a restaurant reviewer before turning to fiction. M 5 1996: The Debt to Pleasure. His first novel is a best-seller. 2000: Mr Phillips The witty story of a 50-year-old accountant who has just been laid off but is unable to tell his family about it. He puts on his business suit and spends the day wandering around London. 2002: Fragrant Harbor 10 15 Work on Words 1. Find the English words for (§1) pharmacie – vitrine d’un magasin – fiable – rhume des foins – médicament – énorme – bouché – mucosités – somnolence – affiche – surveillant d’examen – très drôle 20 25 2. Give equivalents in English for (l. 10 to the end) covered with sand – without children – next to – very cold – go up suddenly – ticket to go somewhere and come back – pause/ time to relax – not expensive Decode the words /trnsprənt/ /pəυstə/ /kplz/ /blənsz/ Culture tips ➤ p. 162 A-levels, the Daily Mail, the Ryder Cup, the Ashes ( 94 r Phillips turns into Kestrel Lane opposite the chemist, whose window displays are one of the most reliable1 indicators of the changing seasons. Today, it’s hay fever medicine, which is advertised by a huge, transparent three-dimensional model of a head with the nose and the sinuses2 blocked with red tubular fillings to indicate mucus. Bye bye hay fever, bye bye drowsiness, says the poster. When Mr Phillips took his A-levels the invigilator had been suffering from the worst case of hay fever he had ever seen. They had all thought that was hilarious. [...] Mr Phillips stops in front of the travel agent, two doors down. There are posters in the window of happy people in places with good weather. A woman of about twenty-five watches her husband batting3 a large beach ball into the air while two small sandy children tug at4 his legs. In the middle distance of another photograph, a man learns to windsurf. Child-free couples walk on beaches in front of a cinema sunset. Standing and looking at the pictures, Mr Phillips has a vision of himself beside a swimming pool somewhere hot. At his right side, a cold drink beaded with sweat5 and icy to the touch. At his left, Karen the secretary, face down, in a leopard print bikini […], her back also beaded with sweat, shiny with suntan oil6, hot to the touch. On his stomach7, which is flatter than in real life, Mr Phillips balances a copy of the Daily Mail, where he is reading about Europe’s triumph over America in the Ryder Cup, or England over Australia in the Ashes, or studying a business story about how some company in which he just happens to have bought lots of shares8 has surged 1000 per cent upwards in a week […]. A list of prices for flights hangs beside one for all-in9 holiday packages: Malaga £179 for 2 weeks Morocco £219 return San Francisco £239 return Costa Rica £299 return Faro £85 return New York £190 Alicante £84 return Paris city break from £109 Atlanta £228 return room £15 p.p.p.n.10 Ask us about Vietnam! Everything seems implausibly cheap, given the distances involved. 30 35 From Mr Phillips (2000) by John LANCHESTER ﲵ 1. reliable /rlaəbl/ 2. sinuses /sanəsz/ 3. bat: frapper avec (ou comme avec) une batte 4. tug (at): tirer (sur), s’accrocher (à) 5. beaded with sweat /bidd wð swet/: perlé de condensation 6. suntan oil: huile solaire 7. stomach /stmək/ 8. shares /ʃeəz/: actions 9. all-in: tout compris 10. p.p.p.n.: per person per night ■ Overall guidelines “An ideal vision”, but no secretary! People in the sun (1960), by Edward HOPPER 1. Read the text and say who the protagonist is and what he is doing. 2. Where is he? Pick out all the elements in the text which helped you decide. ■ Detailed guidelines 1. Reality a. Read §1. What kind of shop is the man looking at? Pick out three words to justify your answer. b. What is he interested in? c. ‘When Mr Phillips took his A-Levels…’ (ll. 7-9): what tense is used here? What for? d. Read Culture tips p. 162 and explain why the boys had thought the situation was hilarious. 2. Dreams a. Read the beginning of §2 down to ‘a cinema sunset’ (l. 16). Where is Mr Phillips now? b. Read ll. 12-16. What does the poster show? c. Does ‘a cinema sunset’ refer to reality? Justify with examples in the § and words from the next sentence. d. ‘Child-free couples’ (l. 15). What does this reveal about Mr Phillips? e. Who would his partner be? Where would the two of them be? f. Read Culture tips p. 162 and say what the references to the Ryder Cup and the Ashes evoke. g. ‘…he just happens to have bought lots of shares…’ (l. 26) What does Mr Phillips imagine about his financial situation? 3. Back to reality a. Look at the list of prices Mr Phillips is actually reading in the shop window. Comment on the figures. b. What does he mean by ‘implausibly cheap’ (l. 35)? What judgement does he pass on the ad? c. Now read the whole text again. What is the recurrent verb form used? Why? ■ Build up Strategies ➤ p. 163 your vocabulary 1. Match the following words with the adequate symptoms. 1. the flu 2. pneumonia /njuməυnə/ 3. measles 4. backache /bkek/ 5. stomachache 6. chickenpox a. aching muscles, headache, fever, cough, sneezing b. a fever and small red spots on the face and body c. a pain in the back d. a pain in the stomach e. a slight fever and a rash starting on the body f. dry cough, high fever, chest pain, rapid breathing 2. Now match the names of the various aches and illnesses with their French equivalents. • a sore throat – feel dizzy – the flu – bronchitis /brɒŋkats/ – a headache – a toothache – a sprained ankle – swollen – have a temperature – a cold – a broken wrist – cough /kɒf/ – measles • la grippe – la rougeole – une angine – un rhume – la bronchite – un mal de tête – un mal de dents – une foulure de la cheville – enflé – avoir de la fièvre – avoir des vertiges – une fracture du poignet – tousser ■ Discussion topics 1. Do you think advertisements are misleading? 2. Can ads bring beauty to our everyday lives? Writing A HAND AT WRITING ➤ p. 97 Imagine you were looking at the same travel agent’s window. Where would you picture yourself, ideally? (100 words) Grammar in context Unit 5 ■ Ad Breaks 䊳 p. 96 000 95 ) Grammar in context Superlatif de supériorité Observez et analysez A. …one of the most reliable indicators of the changing seasons. (ll. 2-3) B. …the worst case of hay fever he had ever seen… (ll. 8-9) Dans l’exemple A, remplacez l’adjectif reliable (“fiable”) d’abord par clear, ensuite par good, en faisant les changements nécessaires. ? Quelles sont les catégories auxquelles ces trois adjectifs appartiennent en ce qui concerne la formation du superlatif de supériorité ? Si vous traduisez l’exemple B, quel sera l’équivalent français de ever ? ? Pourrait-on ici, en anglais, utiliser never ? Pour quelle raison ? Dans l’exemple B, la proposition relative (that) he had ever seen constitue le complément du superlatif. Transformez l’exemple B en utilisant un complément différent. D’abord, utilisez … all the cases he had seen. (Attention : il vous faut ajouter une préposition pour introduire le complément.) Ensuite, utilisez ... the whole country. (Attention au choix de la préposition.) Utilisez les éléments contenus dans A et B pour caractériser la publicité la plus originale/stupide/mauvaise que vous ayez jamais vue : That's the… ad I… Entraînez-vous ! 1 Trouvez une suite à ces énoncés en formulant un superlatif de supériorité. a. Vietnam seems to be a popular destination. (Yes, … these days) b. Is business class a cheap way to fly? (No, … expensive) c. England had a good cricket team last season. (Well, in my opinion, Australia…) d. Buying shares can be risky, can’t it? (Yes indeed! It … form of investment) e. When does the chemist’s shop get crowded? (… just before closing-time) f. It’s an attractive shop window. (I’d say … in the street) g. The island had lovely beaches. (In fact … you could ever wish for) h. Was April a bad month of the year for people who suffer from hay fever? (No, May…) 2 Traduisez les énoncés. a. Ce vol est le moins cher dont j’ai jamais entendu parler. b. C’est le plus beau coucher de soleil que j’aie jamais vu. c. Elle portait le bikini le plus sexy que j’aie jamais vu. d. Le windsurf est le sport nautique le plus fatigant que j’aie jamais pratiqué. e. Quelle est la boisson la plus rafraîchissante et la moins chère que vous pouvez nous servir ? f. Il souffre d’un des pires maux de tête qu’il ait eus depuis longtemps. g. Votre pharmacien vous donnera les meilleurs conseils sur la façon de prendre ce médicament. h. Ils cherchaient le circuit le moins cher que l’agence de voyage pouvait leur proposer. i. Les publicités les plus hilarantes ne sont pas toujours les plus efficaces. Précis grammatical ➤ 57 ( 96 EXTRA! ..., her back also beaded with sweat,... (ll. 20-21) Traduisez cet exemple. Quelle est la différence principale entre l’anglais et le français ? En anglais, on emploie un déterminant possessif pour désigner les parties du corps. Cependant, cet emploi n’est obligatoire que si le “possesseur” a été clairement désigné. Quels exemples du texte le montrent ? Précis grammatical ➤ 65 C just for fun! A Handat Writing… Strategies ➤ p. 163, 171 a description A. Enrichir vos phrases I can picture myself on an island, eating fruit and sipping a drink ★. 1. Ajoutez trois adjectifs aux endroits adéquats : ‘desert’, ‘delicious’, ‘icy’ et faites les modifications éventuelles pour les déterminants. 2. Ajoutez before suivi d’une proposition à l’endroit de ★ pour indiquer que vous ferez ensuite une sieste. B. Améliorer votre expression écrite 1 Analysez le sujet proposé Imagine you were looking at the same travel agent’s window. Where would you picture yourself, ideally? (100 words) you La personne concernée. Imagine Il s’agit d’un sujet d’imagination. Where would you picture yourself, ideally? Lieu et situation qui correspondent à votre idéal. Vous devez décrire une scène : essayez le cas échéant d’utiliser le même style que dans le passage. (100 words) N’oubliez pas de compter les mots et d’indiquer leur nombre en fin de travail. 2 Rassemblez vos idées Utilisez le texte de départ… ■ … pour trouver du lexique happy people – places with good weather – a swimmingpool – somewhere hot – suntan oil ■ … pour illustrer les idées que vous devez développer • activités : batting – beach ball – windsurf – walk on beaches • aisance financière : bought lots of shares – a list of prices for flights… • le succès : triumph over Mobilisez vos connaissances personnelles ■ La page de lexique peut vous donner des idées supplémentaires. REVISE YOUR VOCABULARY ➤ p. 100 ■ Pensez à des lieux qui vous semblent idylliques et dressez des listes de mots autour de ces lieux : • une île : exotic – tropical – palm trees – luxuriant ■ Imaginez une ou des situations : • travail : I am my own boss – all my clients are satisfied – no one ever complains – nobody is ever laid off. • loisirs : I can do all the sports I fancy – I can afford everything I want. ■ Expression de l’hypothèse si vous décidez de ne pas imiter le style du texte : • coupure/décrochage avec la réalité avec le prétérit hypothétique PRÉCIS GRAMMATICAL ➤ 8B Imagine I were on a tropical island. • would + BV : I would be with true friends relaxing, listening to Hawaiian music… I would simply relax and enjoy… 3 Réfléchissez au plan et préparez-vous à rédiger ■ Avant Avant de rédiger, notez au brouillon quelques éléments de la scène que vous imaginez. Ensuite, décrivez-la : bruits, couleurs, personnages, lieu, époque, etc. ■ Pendant Choisissez un style : • vous pouvez garder celui du texte : Mr Phillips décrit une situation idéale, quasiment sans ajouter aucun commentaire, au présent. • vous pouvez opter pour un autre style avec des superlatifs et des adverbes de renforcement : listening to the most delightful music, looking at utterly amazing/breath-taking sceneries – an ideal setting – the most perfect place to be in… ■ Après Relisez-vous ; vérifiez la concordance des temps, le nombre de mots, la variété des adjectifs. Éliminez toutes les répétitions. plants – heat – sandy beaches – sailing – oasis • une ville qui vous a toujours fait rêver : superb skyscrapers – overlooking the ocean – chauffeured limousines Unit 5 ■ Ad Breaks Now, your turn! 97 ) Pub Corner ﲵ Sounds and rhythm The various forms of some and that ■ How it works Like many other grammatical words (see p. 118) some and that have two forms: a full (or strong) form and a reduced (or weak) form. Some and that may have different functions and meanings, and their spoken forms vary accordingly. 1. Some a. Used as an article Some is pronounced /səm/ (reduced form) whenever it is used as an article. Listen: Would you like some /səm/ tea? b. In all other cases Some is pronounced /sm/ (full form) in all other cases. Listen: Some /sm/ American ads are funny. That was some /sm/ ten years ago. Could I have some /sm/? I want something /smθŋ/. 2. That a. Demonstrative (determiner or pronoun) When it is a demonstrative determiner or pronoun, that is always pronounced /ðt/ (full form). Listen: What’s that /ðt/ noise? He told me that /ðt/ yesterday. b. Conjunction or relative pronoun When it is a conjunction or a relative pronoun, that is pronounced /ðət/ (reduced form). Listen: He told me that /ðət/ the new commercial was stupid. It was the only ad that /ðət/ was clever. ■ Now, your turn! Do ads bother you? ■ Think ahead! Pick out the words about advertising. 1 Have you seen the last Nike commercial? Wow! Awesome! I just love it! 2 Those ads you see everywhere on those huge billboards are a real form of pollution. 3 Our society is ruled by money and trade, so, advertising is just part of the system. 4 I think that sometimes ads are real works of art, especially the ones for perfumes. 5 When you buy a magazine, you have to turn ten pages before finding a real article! I can’t stand it! Who wants to read a catalogue? 6 Ads pay for magazines. If there were no ads in your magazine, it would be ten times more expensive! 7 Those pop-ups on my computer screen drive me crazy! Listen to the recording and practise. 8 Précis phonologique ➤ p. 172 Précis grammatical ➤ p. 38, 39, 47 ( 98 I don’t feel concerned by advertising. Most ads target people that are totally different from me! ﲵ Overall comprehension 1. Number of characters 2. Place Strategies ➤ p. 163 your vocabulary ‘Better’ and ‘worse’ 3. Topic ﲵ ■ Build up Detailed comprehension 1. Listen to Part 1. a. Benjamin’s job b. What is Benjamin used to working with? ☞ stock market c. What is Freddy complaining about? d. Give two examples of these nuisances. 2. Listen to Part 2. a. What makes people more vulnerable? ☞ broadband b. Advantages of the service ☞ download c. What does Freddy hate? d. Benjamin’s opinion 3. Listen to Part 3. ‘It’s getting worse than the telly.’ ‘Better’ and ‘worse’ have other meanings beyond that of comparatives of ‘good’ and ‘bad’. a. Match the following phrases with their meaning. 1. have seen better days 2. the better part of a year 3. be better off 4. think better of be richer – have been more successful – reconsider – a large part of b. Translate the sentences integrating one of the following phrases might do worse than – for the worse – make things/matters worse 1. Surfer sur Internet n’est pas ce que vous pourriez faire de pire. 2. As-tu remarqué que les publicités ont changé, mais pas en bien ? 3. La connexion était mauvaise, et pour ne rien arranger, il y avait sans arrêt des publicités qui apparaissaient sur l’écran. a. Is Benjamin bothered? b. Which ads does Benjamin object to, and why? ☞ put up with c. Does Freddy agree with him? d. Benjamin’s final opinion ■ Discussion topics 1. Would you say advertisements invade our private lives? 2. Do you think there are some subjects that should not be advertised? Give examples. 3. The title of the recording is ‘All that glitters is not gold.’ Do you agree? Explain your point of view. Unit 5 ■ Ad Breaks 99 )